Tuesday, 2 August 2016

TEENY ADVENTURES..................A GRIPPING STORY OF 4 TEENAGERS SEEKING SOME FUN!

AND THOSE TEENAGERS ARE:
SAM(a big fan of RAJNIKANTH);
SASHA AND NICK (siblings)who love caroms; and
TANIA (the gadget guru of their gang)
LET'S SEE WHAT THEY HAVE IN HOLD FOR US........

CHAPTER 1: THE CALL FROM ROME            

                It was mid-June. The sun was shining brightly on the windowpane. Sasha and Nick were playing caroms as usual in their room when their mother called them down."Nick,Sasha there is something I want to tell you". Filled with curiosity, they went down."Your father has called from Rome"."It's an emergency.Pack your bags",said she."There's no way we are spoiling our holidays in Rome"they said."But how can I go leaving you behind?said mom."We're teens, mom.We'll take care."they said."Bye".

CHAPTER 2:FUN BEGINS
              After what seemed very long,they decided to call Sam and Tania.
Just when they picked up the receiver of the landline,they heard voices."Come to the broken down hut on the hill. Bring the loot. Sharp 12:00 am."It was a cross-connection". Said Nick. They told Sam and Tania all about the call.😱
CHAPTER 3:INVESTIGATION  
                They went there at 11:58 pm and hid behind the bushes.Sharp at 12:00, 4 cars containing 1000$ each arrived. 8 men emerged, and put the money in the hut. One of them said,"Bring the rest 6000$ tomorrow without fail. Otherwise boss will beat ME". The children thought of what to do. Sam said,"I saw in a recent Rajnikanth  film, that we can trap the thieves inside itself by laying traps."Everyone agreed to this plan.
CHAPTER 4:EXECUTING THE PLAN
             The following day,they reached the spot at 11:00pm and started the preparations.They were done by 11:55pm and hid in the bushes. After 5 minutes,the smugglers arrived. One fell for the string at the door trap, while one fell for the oil on the stairs or loose plank trap. Once they all were in, Sam bolted the door from outside,while Tania called the police.
CHAPTER 5:VICTORY! 
         They were finally arrested and the children were given rewards of 1000$ each. They were all very happy. Suddenly ,someone roared, "I'll be back sooner or later and take my revenge, children".



~~ Eshaan Pareek
Grade VIIB
M.C.G.S

11 comments:

  1. Awesome story Eshaan....continue your creativity...can't wait to read more....

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  2. Interesting..waiting for sequel .. Good Job Eshaan

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  3. Short and sweet... Good job!! Eshaan

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  4. Eshaan its super!'
    Add some more
    -adi

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  5. Nice story, waiting for next part.

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  6. I mean, I am waiting for your next work.

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  7. Don't worry, I'll release the next part soon.

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  8. excellent eshaan

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  9. awswomre eshaan from raj

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  10. waiting eagerly for the next part fron raj and nice tital

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