Wow!!! I couldn’t stop myself from telling this
whenever I went to my grandfather’s garden. Oh, I almost forgot to introduce
myself I am Katherine, a student of a very boring school with a very boring
life, doing the same things every day. Until my father received a transfer and
now here we are in my grandfather’s house in Bangalore. We have just shifted
here about two days ago. I am always wonderstruck looking at my grandfather’s
garden, there are mango and apple trees surrounding it and many bushes scattered
here and there. There is a flower bed at the entrance and ooh the most
important thing there is an old banyan tree in the center of this garden. My
father always tells me that this tree is very special, but I don’t know why,
all I see are squirrels, rabbits scampering here and there, but I sort of feel
magical around this tree. “Katherine”, my mother was calling me for dinner.
After dinner I went straight to my bedroom. From my room I could see the
garden, that night in full moon’s night I was not feeling sleepy. I was
starring out of the window…….. Suddenly I saw some movement in the garden, I
strained my neck to see what is was and what I saw, and I couldn’t believe my
eyes. From the banyan tree’s roots, I saw small creatures climbing up; they all
were wearing green hats, vests, shoes, everything in green! I couldn’t believe
my eyes, so I mustered up courage and went downstairs and I opened the door and
to my shock I saw……
PART 2:-
I saw a very bright
green color glow….it was so bright that I was unable to
open my eyes. Slowly the light started to fade away and when I managed to open
my eyes I saw the glow disappearing behind the banyan tree!!! I started to walk
towards the tree and what I saw made my heart skip a beat…….There was a door in
that tree! I decided to go through the door and I found myself in a completely
different world. There some sort of green dressed creatures with pointed ears
and noses were hurrying here and there. Although their expressions were gentle
all of them looked tensed…none of them were paying attention to me. I cleared
my voice and said “Excuse me. Could you please tell me what this place is and
what is going around here”? As soon as they heard this all of them stopped
their work and started looking at me. I felt hundreds of eyes looking at me at
the same time. One of them said “I think she is Harold’s daughter…maybe she can
save us…let us take her to Her Highness”. I couldn’t believe what I heard those
creatures knew my father, but how? Many questions started to arise in my mind. After
that four of those creatures came up to me and asked me to follow them. I
did…and after a couple of minutes I found myself in a magnificent castle. There
on a throne sat a very gorgeous lady. I thought to myself that could somebody
pinch me. OW! I cried one of those creatures had pinched me. Now I stared at it
in utter belief.” You can read my mind”.”Yes,” the creature replied. Now that
lady came up to me smiling she said “You are Harlod’s daughter”. I couldn’t
take it anymore my brain was bursting with millions of questions as I was about
to open my mouth, the lady told me “Welcome to Enchansia, I Queen Isabella and
your father were good friends. He has helped our kingdom in several ways and I
am pleased to meet you Katherine and I would have showed you our kingdom but….”
She trailed off. “But what I asked”? Isabella told me that now their kingdom
was in great danger and perhaps I was the only one who could help them. I was
taken aback in surprise and before I could ask her anything more, she told me
“come with me”……
To be
continued in the next part…..
Written by:
Isha(Reporter) Grade 8 M.C.G.S
as a part of NARRATIVE WRITING {Done as a club activity}
Wow what an interesting story I am excited to know further story
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ReplyDeleteCaptivating story line. Seems mysterious and thrilling too. Looking forward to read the next part of the mystery.
ReplyDeleteIsha the way you have Put this story is appreciatable.cant wait more . Put up the next part
ReplyDeleteIsha the way you have Put this story is appreciatable.cant wait more . Put up the next part
ReplyDeleteAmazing stories,poems,articles. Well done.
ReplyDeleteShankar Rao
Mukund really very thrilling story. Please post the next part of the story.
ReplyDeleteSri Varsha
isha waiting for the next part
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ReplyDeleteKudos to the unique enticing story writing skill which makes the audience impatient to read more...keep up the creativity candle bright and radiant as always!!!
ReplyDeleteinteresting,thrilling and enthusiastic.Waiting for the next part Isha.By Varshini,yourclassmate
ReplyDeleteinteresting,thrilling and enthusiastic.Waiting for the next part Isha.By Varshini,yourclassmate
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ReplyDeletesuperb isha wating for more your classmate afreen
ReplyDeletesuperb isha wating for more your classmate afreen
ReplyDeleteStupendous work Isha!!! Very happy to see your creative writing skills taking wings....chOice of names are also very good. Waiting to be transported to the new place...ENCHANSIA!!!!
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