Sunday, 17 July 2016

The Mysterious face at the castle window


CHAPTER 1:
"Have we reached the station?", asked Jenny, a fair girl to her brother Tim. "We've almost reached the station'', replied Tim. "Oh!, Thomas would be so happy to see us after so many years", said Tina, their cousin. "I bet so!" said Tim. They arrived at a small station with a board that said, "Carolinian station". They all rushed out of the train and saw a tall boy shouting to them, "Hey, over here!". They all ran at full speed to Thomas. "I thought your train was never going to come!'' said Thomas. "Our train was delayed by half an hour'', said the three tired children. "Well, you all look really tired, so lets eat some ice-cream before going home'', said Thomas. They sat in an ice-cream shop nearby and had ice-cream. After finishing, they headed to Thomas's house where uncle Joe and aunt Joanna welcomed them. They had dinner and went to sleep. Next morning, they got up early as uncle Joe and Aunt Joanna were going for a picnic out of station. "Take care of the house", said Aunt Joanna, "And take care of you", said Uncle Joe and they left in a taxi. "Well what shall we do?", asked Thomas. "I think we'll go to that ancient castle you were talking about", said Tim. "I think you should first see the castle with a binocular", said Thomas. "Why?" asked Tim. But before he could see anything else, Thomas brought a binocular and showed him the castle. "Whoa! That castle is really spooky! It looks as if a ghost lives in it!", said Tim.


 But just then Tim started shivering. He gave the binocular to Thomas and he looked through it. "Oh! My! God!" shouted Thomas. "What happened?" asked the girls. "There was a...a face at the window in one of the towers of the castle", replied the boys. "Really? Then we need to find who it is, he may be in trouble", said Tina. "Well Thomas, you are the biggest one here, so you tell, what should we do?", said Jenny. "I say we fall into adventure!"




CHAPTER 2 : GOING TO THE TOWER

     "Well Thomas, you are the biggest one here, so you tell, what should we do?", said Jenny. "I say we fall into adventure!", said Jenny. "You all are right, we need to find who that person was", said Thomas. "We'll start tomorrow at evening, so that we can reach there at night". "Right now me and Tim will go to the shop to buy food for the journey", said Thomas and he and Tim left hurriedly. Tina and Jenny played cards until it started raining and suddenly the boys came running out of the door, soaked with water. "Aaaacheee!! We brought the things", said Tim, sneezing.They ate dinner and went to sleep. It rained heavily until 10:00 in the morning when the window made a large 'Thump!' which woke up Tim. Not only Tim, but everyone in the house was awake then. They hurried and directly had lunch as it was lunch time and started to get ready for their journey. They packed the food for their trip and were ready very soon. "We actually forgot to buy torches and maps last night as it was raining", said Thomas,"So I'm going out to buy it now". "One question, why do we need maps?", asked Jenny. At night there will be no transportation", replied Thomas. He went out of the house and soon came in no time. They were all ready and started their journey. They reached the bus station and took a bus to the castle. They waited and waited and also ate some of the snacks they brought. Then, finally they reached their destination. The bus driver was pretty scared to see that place himself. They got out of the bus and ran towards the castle and saw a tall thin man. "10 dollars for all of you to go around the castle", he said. They paid the money and entered the castle. An odd smell hit their noses with a lot of strength. They didn't care going round the castle but that tower. They kept on searching and finally found it. There was a rusty staircase to enter, but they knew even
if a baby stepped on it it would brake. They went around the tower and found a loose rock. They pulled it out and to their surprise they saw.....

CHAPTER 3: THE SECRET PASSAGE
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They went around the tower and found a loose rock. They pulled it out and to their surprise they saw a secret passage! They looked at each other and decided to go in. They went straight for some time then found a stone staircase. It was surely stronger than the rusty one, even though the stone one was older. They switched their torches on as it was pitch black. All was going well until suddenly Jenny screamed. Aaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!", "What happened?", the others shouted. "There was a small spider on the wall", replied Jenny, frightened. Then the others shouted back at her,"You screamed for THAT!!". "What? You know I'm scared of spiders", said Jenny. Instead of fighting, they just continued their journey. "Hey guys, I feel we're going really deep underground", said Thomas. Indeed they were going deep underground. They felt as if they were walking for hours and finally reached the flat ground. Then they saw it was not a straight road but totally a confusing one. Because it had a left, a right in every direction you can think of. They walked slowly when they heard a song, like a ghost singing. "La..la.la........la..la.la......la..la.la.la..la..la". A shiver ran down everyone's spine. Then, Thomas shouted, "Tim! Stop it! You almost gave me a heart attack!". "Hee! Hee! Hee!",laughed Tim, as he loved playing pranks."Its more like a maze here", said Tina who is always very quiet."We need to split up into two groups, Jenny and me, you and Tim.", said Thomas and they split up and went in different directions. It was really dark and nobody could see where they were going. Thomas and Tina found a room with something like a huge box with switches and switched it on. The lights came on and Thomas and Tina smiled at each other and went to search for Tim and Tina. Just then they heard someone scream,AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!



CHAPTER 4: EVERYBODY IS TRAPPED!


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  "What was that?", asked Jenny to Thomas. "I don't know", replied Thomas. They continued searching until they see Tim an Tina running at full speed. "Run! Ruuuunnnn!!", shouted Tim. They saw something dark and big behind them. As they come closer, they saw it was some kind of a creature and they started running too. Soon all of them were running at  full speed. "Whoa! What on earth is that?", shouted Thomas. "I don't know, I think its some kind of a monster". They kept running until they lost it. They saw some kind of hiding place in a corner and hid there. "I don't think this is a hiding place, but if we speak here I'm pretty sure no one would hear us", said Tim. "Hey guys! Look here! You can block this place with this stone by pushing it", said Tina. They pushed it and finally gave a sigh of relief. They sat at a corner and waited. Then they start asking questions. "First of all, what did you do for those things to come behind you?", asked Thomas. "We didn't do anything! The moment the lights got switched on, those things came out of nowhere", replied Tim and Tina. "I think we'll name those monsters as 'The Crotons'", said Jenny with a giggle. "It is a nice name but I don't think it is a good time to laugh. Don't you all see? We're all TRAPPED!!!





To be continued......


~
K Mukunth Maithreyan
Grade 6
MCGS


29 comments:

  1. Great English......keep it up

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  2. Good initiative mukunth.eager to read the next episode.

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  3. Interesting. Awaiting for the adventure

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  4. WOW!!! Wonderful story....can't wait to know more about the mysterious face and the adventure...

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  5. Very nice.. Well eager to know...further

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  6. Very nice.. Well eager to know...further

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  7. Keep making stories you will go very high

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  8. Very creative narration, especially the last line is super cool. Waiting to read the next chapter.

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  9. Very..... Thrilling Mukunth.Please post the next part.
    Varsha.

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  10. Very creative Mukund, waiting for the complete story...way to go...u r just awesome

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  11. Hi Mukund. Very interesting. Waiting for the next part. Keep it up

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  12. Got me hooked... Waiting for part 2... Srini

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  13. Very impressive..Flawless English..A-One..Little disappointed when i saw " To Be Continued "...Anxiously waiting for the next part..proud of you my dear !!!
    Very good initiative by the School to encourage budding writers.

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  14. Wow waiting anxiously for part 2 . Kudos to the budding star for crafting such a story full of suspense and thrill!Congratulations to the proud parents ans school too!

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  15. very interesting,thrilling and adventurous.Very eager and enthusiastic to know what happens next.....

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  16. by Varshini of class 8th

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  17. by Varshini of class 8th

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  18. by Varshini of class 8th

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  19. Woaw! over 20 comments, huh... well done, I guess

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  20. u r becoming better at giving a suspense ending...love ur style of writing n use of words like rusty staircase and now waiting for the 3rd chapter Mukunth

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  21. Excellent Mukunth..

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  22. Grt job. Mukundh u ve already made ur mark.. Awaiting the Next part

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  23. so interesting.........keep it up Mukunth.waiting for next part

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  24. Thank you everyone for appreciating and encouraging my work.

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  25. Enormously inventive and gripping. Keep writing Mukunth

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  26. Intresting keep it up.. great work

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